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i think it's pretty good so far - anyone have any ideas for a story arc?
meets a beautiful woman, overcomes obstacles.
Bit like a Tom Cruise movie.
workshopping is a long and hard process that you've gotta grab with both hands and wrestle with until you've got that explosive material you desire
a cross between an oboe and an icicle?
"How do you titillate an ocelot? Show it pictures of other ocelots fucking."