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The Nick Cave one is great - I don't see what they're getting at.
The Roth one is kind of purposefully forced, no? Not actually stifled and shoddy. Though 'm not sure, I'm dubious about reading that one so no idea really.
I dunno, I can't be bothered to read them all but the second one sure as hell is bad, but plain old bad writing.
I don't even know what they mean, bad sex, what do they mean?
for describing avril lavigne's flange in this manner -
!he slips his hands under her wasted buttocks and enters her like a fucking pile driver."
it often totally misses the point
"Panting, Georgie starts rubbing her hands round Bobby's biological erogenous zones, turning his trousers into a tent with lots of rude organs camping underneath. Bobby sucks all the freckles and moles off her chest, pulling the GD bib wheeeeeeeeeee over her head and flicking Georgie's turquoise bra off her shoulders then kissing her tits"
The last one is very... hmm... gives me the impression that the book it comes from is infuriating.