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I need some lyrical help

SCROTUM [Edit] [Delete] 20:08, 20 October '08

A girl I like quite a lot quoted me Laura Marling, saying that I had "lost my poetic ethic".

I want to come up with a strong lyrical retort, can people help me out?

Roughly keeping in with any of these themes: someone being lusted after by multiple people (in a vaguely respectful manner though); or of a girl being on a pedestal above everyone else; or of awkward shyness towards a beautiful girl; or of one needing to sort out their own affairs first; or of someone having weak music taste.

Cheers.


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