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Review my review! Pwease! (Xiu Xiu and Final Fantasy centric)

tedmaul [Edit] [Delete] 6 replies 16:29, 6 June '06

Hello!

I want criticism please. I want it smothered on me like factor 500 suncream.

http://www.mapsmagazine.co.uk/xiu%20xiu%20final%20fantasy.htm

Now have yourself a biscuit

Cheers!

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  • No criticism from me.

    Sorry.

    bobbygeorge | 6 Jun '06, 16:34 | X
    • i think i meant a "critique"...

      as in, Is It Any Good, or would you rather read the serial number on the underside of a urinal. how can it be bettered. whats rubbish and whats unrubbish. that sort of thing. i know its a lot to ask but youre the one who clicked on the thread, dont blame me! ;p

      tedmaul @bobbygeorge | 6 Jun '06, 16:37 | X
      • No, I'm saying I thought it was good.

        As in, I will not be criticising your efforts.

        bobbygeorge @tedmaul | 6 Jun '06, 16:57 | X
        • oh go on please!!

          I want to be sneezing despair out of my tear ducts!

          thankyou Tom :D

          tedmaul @bobbygeorge | 6 Jun '06, 17:00 | X
          • 'tis good, but a few niggles...

            there's a few commas that should be semi-colons or en-rules meaning some sentences don't make grammatical sense (see last one of the Xiu Xiu section)... you've spelt "medieval" the American way (ick) and technically it should be a capital M... stop start is a description and should be hyphenated... same goes for long dead... the ending is a bit rubbish.

            but there's lots to love about it so well done :)

            wearsthetrousers @tedmaul | 6 Jun '06, 17:52 | X
            • ha!

              you BEAST!!!

              no really, all appreciated :)

              tedmaul @wearsthetrousers | 6 Jun '06, 19:44 | X
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