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Review my review! Pwease! (Xiu Xiu and Final Fantasy centric)
Hello!
I want criticism please. I want it smothered on me like factor 500 suncream.
http://www.mapsmagazine.co.uk/xiu%20xiu%20final%20fantasy.htm
Now have yourself a biscuit
Cheers!
No criticism from me.
Sorry.
i think i meant a "critique"...
as in, Is It Any Good, or would you rather read the serial number on the underside of a urinal. how can it be bettered. whats rubbish and whats unrubbish. that sort of thing. i know its a lot to ask but youre the one who clicked on the thread, dont blame me! ;p
No, I'm saying I thought it was good.
As in, I will not be criticising your efforts.
oh go on please!!
I want to be sneezing despair out of my tear ducts!
thankyou Tom :D
'tis good, but a few niggles...
there's a few commas that should be semi-colons or en-rules meaning some sentences don't make grammatical sense (see last one of the Xiu Xiu section)... you've spelt "medieval" the American way (ick) and technically it should be a capital M... stop start is a description and should be hyphenated... same goes for long dead... the ending is a bit rubbish.
but there's lots to love about it so well done :)
ha!
you BEAST!!!
no really, all appreciated :)