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Or is it going to reference music more and more? I do have a criticism, sadly not particularly constructive but my excuse is its late...I don't like the style. Short sentences for me are fine if they still convey a whole point, but in this case they add little but emphasis (that isn't always needed). Otherwise I can see your point.
It could have gone on the social board. The song resonated I guess. That to me was the impact. Pressure on people can come out in artistic form. Not necessarily the song attached but it felt, to me fitting. Constructive criticism is a good thing. Thank you.