So I have this song, and I don't know what to do with it, or if it's even good. Can anyone out there give me some constructive criticism or just opinions on it that are more than a few words long? I'd really appreciate it.

It will get better (I hope):
http://soundcloud.com/bright_terrible_scene/it-will-get-better-i-hope

Thank you.

Sincerely,
-Nate