Seemed alright to me.

Don't bother linking to the previous threads. I've already searched for them and decided I can't be arsed wading through all the critical clichés to see if anyone actually had a well thought out critique.

What, exactly, is s'posed to be wrong with it (beyond the fact that one of the character is running around and climbing walls etc. 30 seconds after having a near-enough auto-caesarian)?